honestly you could take out the first section and it would be better The solution makes excellent use of the space and structures in the level, and it's deceptively tricky to find. Interesting. 166 bait route! This is a great level, IMO!
If the original record wasn't so far away, I'd give 5 stars! Pretty good despite unintended path. There are actually a lot of optimal 67s and 65s here so be careful. Great solution. Would have liked the 30 to be found by yourself for the full 5* but nice design anyways.